Today I went to Hoan Kiem Lake, which is near my house. It was overcrowded. Heading back, I suggested to my daughter that we bypass a fence to save time. A guard caught us red handed, and in a friendly way scolded me about what possible upbringing could have left me now so childish. It was all good fun. I just wanted to beat the crowd and be home again faster.

Today, I went to Hoan Kiem Lake which is near my house. It was incredibly crowded. On the way back home, I suggested my daughter to go over the fence so that we could go home faster. The guardian caught us red-handed and he slightly shouted at us in such a funny way that I thought that even though I’m a grown up I was childish when I went over the fence to have fun. I just wanted to go home faster without being slowed down by the crowd.

Today, I went to Hoan Kiem Lake, which is near my house. It was incredibly crowded. Coming back, I suggested that my daughter crash into the fence with me so that we could go home faster. The guardian caught us red-handed and he slightly shouted at us in a funny way that even though I am grown up, how childish I was when I broke through the fence to have fun. I just wanted to get home faster without going in the jammed crowded people flow. People flow is weird! Good ideas but structuring sentences could be better