Dear Mr Zhang, I am writing to you this letter to express my sincere interest to apply and become a tour guide for the trip to Beijing. Prior before, I have travelled to Beijing multiple times and fell in love with the heritage and culture of the city. The places that I have visited before were the Palace Museum, the Great Wall just to mentioned a few and many more. If I was chosen for this role, I will assist to plan for the tour itinerary such as the recommended and famous must visit places in the city and draw up the essential items that one should bring to be prepared for the trip. For example, extra sets of clothes, umbrellas for the bad weather and camera to take memorable photos. Hope to hear from you soon and I look forward to the day where we will embark on our trip to the city. Thank you. Regards, xxx

Dear Mr Zhang, I am writing regarding the opportunity to act as a guide during the upcoming trip to Beijing. I have been to Beijing several times and I am familiar with many places of interest, such as the Palace Museum, the Great Wall and so on. If I am fortunate enough to be able to serve in this position, I would be happy to introduce these famous places to my classmates. Additionally, I would like to suggest we bring some essential items on our trip, such as seasonally-appropriate clothing, umbrellas and cameras. I hope to hear back from you soon, and am looking forward to our stay in Beijing. Yours Sincerely happyrose

Can you help me correct these sentences? Dear Mr. Zhang: I am writing this letter in regards to being a guide for the trip to Beijing. I have been to Beijing several times, and I am pretty familiar with places of interest, such as the Palace Museum, the Great Wall of China, and so on. If I become a guide, I will introduce these places to my classmates. I suggest we bring some essential things with us, such as appropriate clothing for the weather, umbrellas, and cameras. I look forward to your reply and to our stay in Beijing. Sincerely, Your Name