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90 day's training: Day 12
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) This picture was taken on the Herren Island. This castle is called the Herrenchiemsee Castle. It was built by the king Ludwig Ⅱ of Bavaria in Germany.
2) He is known for the world wide famous castle Neuschwanstein. The Herrenchiemsee Castle is one of his three castles.
3) This castle is modelled the Versailles in France, but the size is much smaller than the Versailles.
4) There was the carriage which we rode in. These horses were very cute so I asked a coachman if it was no problem to take their pictures.
5) He said me that I should take pictures from left side. He told me that it would be better to take the pictures of horses because of the beautiful background with the castle.
Sep 19, 2024 1:27 PM
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90 day's training: Day 12
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) This picture was taken on Herren Island. This castle is called the Herrenchiemsee Castle. It was built by king Ludwig Ⅱ of Bavaria in Germany.
2) He is known for the world wide/internationally famous castle Neuschwanstein. The Herrenchiemsee Castle is one of his three castles.
3) This castle was modelled on Versailles in France, but it is much smaller than Versailles.
4) There was the carriage which we rode in. These horses were very cute so I asked the coachman if it was okay to take their pictures.
5) He told me that I should take pictures from the left side. He told me that it would be better to take the pictures of horses because of the beautiful background of the castle.
September 19, 2024
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English, German, Japanese
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