There are some minor punctuation issues (you don't need spaces either side of quotation marks, and there should be a comma after "vivacious"), but grammatically it looks fine. Generally, I would not capitalize "copperpod", but there may be a reason for this depending on the context. In your title, the word "two" should be written in full, not with a figure (and you should not capitalize the first letter of every word).

The only thing I see is a comma needed after the word, "vivacious".

it swayed gracefully from side to side Why be writen in such a way, it looks a little bit strange.