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does this sentence make sense?
With its high-end lifestyle, it integrates gemstone cultural concept, cultural innovation and R&D, making it a perfect commercial center.
May 9, 2013 3:32 AM
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The part that seems a little confusing is "it integrates gemstone cultural concept." Is "gemstone" the name of a specific cultural concept? Or perhaps, are gemstones important to cultural design and ideas?? If it's the second one, it should say:
With its high-end lifestyle, it integrates cultural gemstone designs, cultural innovation, and R&D, making it a perfect commercial center.
May 9, 2013
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