点个赞！ 很棒

you did a good job,you dont have to correct it as it is almost perfect

“请帮忙改一下！”as titel is more appropriate.

People say that because Chinese characters are not written alphabetically, the Chinese language seems more difficult than other languages. 大家都说因为汉字不是用字母写的， 所以中文好像比别的语言难学。 Chinese tones are a major problem for Chinese language learners, because Chinese characters can be pronounced with more that one tone, and the difference in tone reflects differences in meaning. 因为汉字会（X会）有几（几is okey，多is better）个发音（读音is better）而且发音（读音）会影响汉字的意思，所以对学中文来说声调（读音）是学中文最大的问题。 It is very important to learn pinyin. Most Chinese discionaries are arranged in the alphabetical order of pinyin, and the input method of most Chinese language sofware also uses pinyin. 学拼音很重要。 大部分中文字典是用拼音排列的， 而且中文软件差不多都是用拼音输入汉字的。 为什么说学任何一种语言都很难？ 因为为了学好语言要学听，（、） 读，（、） 写，（、） 说四个部分。 中国人习惯说“听说读写”，而且作为习语常常是不加标点的 为什么要学拼音？ 因为从拼音上可以看出汉字的发音。 为什么学发音要特别注意声调？ 因为声调跟汉字的意思有关系。 学中文和学别的外语有什么区别？ 学中文要学好汉字。