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Is this sentence correct?
The tourist is standing with a video camera and making a video.
Jun 10, 2014 9:51 AM
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The tourist takes a camera and he's recording a video.
June 10, 2014
It is fine. Yes, you could drop the first "video" beacuse the second one will explain it. Besides, most photo cameras can shoot video these days so it's less of an issue. You could even drop "and": The tourist is standing with a camera making a video.
Some variations:
- The tourist is holding a camera and making a video.
- The tourist is shooting a video with a camera.
- The tourist is shooting a video with his camera.
June 10, 2014
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