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is my English c0rrect? if n0t.. feeL free to c0rrect it....thanks! I dont need a guard All I wanna have is someone I can Lean 0n... I don't need a doctor Just someone who will make my w0rLd r0ck 'n roLL..... I really need you buddy But I dunno why w0n't y0u believe me! Honestly, I need y0u buDDy 'tiL eternity! wo ai y xiang n! buDdY!!!!
Sep 18, 2008 8:57 AM
Answers · 3
Actually, buddy, no one ever says "I do not know," they always say, "I don't know." And companion is a really rare word and usually used about animals. I dont need a guard -i guess so but guard isn't really ... that common, like in a poem about your buddy. All I wanna have is someone I can Lean 0n... -all i want is someone i can lean on. Wanna have, yeah that's right but this thought, i'd say "all i want" I don't need a doctor -yes Just someone who will make my w0rLd r0ck 'n roLL..... -rock my world. rock and roll isn't really a verb... I really need you buddy But I dunno why w0n't y0u believe me! -Why you won't believe me. Verb before noun is a question. Honestly, I need y0u buDDy 'tiL eternity! -meh, yes. wo ai y xiang n! buDdY!!!! -Don't know chizoid languages so **watevies**
September 19, 2008
also do not use ambiguous words. use simple words and be DIRECT! tell what you really meant and dont play words. if your in a literary contest then phonetic and imagery words might apply
September 18, 2008
it depends upon the usage of english words, how you play with your sentences. if you are pertaining to a casual conversation, then this is somehow correct. the usage of slang words of such is acceptable if and only if the situation is informal. if your in a formal conversation, you must opt to select words that appopriate hence, it is imperative that you address it in a polite and formal way. please use instead of " i dunno" say, " i do not know" or "buddy" rather say "friend or companion.. etc..
September 18, 2008
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