My favorite book. Find my mistake I wrote my opinion about my favorite book on English. I am writing such article first time. I like read a books. One from my favorite book is a "The shawshank redemption". Main character Andy Dyufreyn important role in this book. But will fair if I talk that movie from this book written Steven King was filmed better then in book. Young Andy accused in murder, but he didnt this. Torture and bullying felt Andy. However Andy turned very smart man an he found exit. I love this book and advise will read her. Please find my mistake in this article, but mistakes will be many. I sure. Sorry for mistakes in this little article and thanks those who will help. I love Italki, criticism and you my friend!
Apr 19, 2016 2:03 PM
Answers · 1
Post this under the Notebook section if you want people to correct it! Then people can highlight mistakes, etc. Hope this helps. Otherwise, here is how I would write what you wrote while trying to keep it as close to what you said as possible: I wrote my opinion about my favorite book in English. I am writing such an article for the first time. I like reading books. One of my favorite books is "The Shawshank Redemption." The main character, Andy Dyufreyn, plays an important role in this book. To be fair, I should say that the movie is better than the book, which was written by Steven King. Young Andy is accused of murder (and sent to prison), but he didn't do it. (There,) He is tortured and bullied. However, Andy becomes smart and finds a way to escape. I love this book and would highly recommend it. Hope this helps!
April 19, 2016
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