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Is correct this below text, please?
Hello, I am so sorry to hear about the sister's accident and your brhoter too. I hope they both are recovered as soon as possible, or got well sooner. Anyway, I would like to send me agair your phone number because I didn't add on my contacts because I forgot it to add it. I am really sorry for everything. I will try to vistit in this month I will have time to chat, and also I would like to say how I have to look for on italki web to correct your written. I know your name is faith , but I can't find it.
Take care!
see you!
May 6, 2016 11:46 AM
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Hello, I am so sorry to hear about the sister's accident and your brother too. I hope they both are recovered as soon as possible, or got well sooner. Anyway, can you send me your phone number again because I didn't add it on my contacts because I forgot to add it. I am really sorry for everything. I will try to visit in this month I will have time to chat, and also I would like to tell you how I have to look for on italki web to correct your written. I know your name is faith , but I can't find it.
Take care!
see you!
(I think this more better.)
good luck
May 6, 2016
Hello , I am so sorry to hear about the accident involving your sister and brother.
I hope they have both recovered , and if not, I hope they will recover as soon as possible
Anyway , I would like to have your phone number again because I forgot to add it to my contact list the last time you gave me . I am really sorry for my forgetfulness .
I will try to vist it in this month > What do you mean by "it"?
I will try to visit you this month ,and we can chat a lot since I have much free time.
By the way , how can I find you on italki so that I can correct whatever you have written.
I know you name is Faith , but I still cannot locate/find you there.
Note > Do not use 2 "because" in one sentence when 1 "because" is good enough
May 6, 2016
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