Do these three sentenced sound natural in English. Can you explain my errors thanks
He also gets antsy and a bit tearful when he is suffering from colic. To ease his pain during colic bouts I put him to sleep on me on his tummy.

Question

Do these three sentenced sound natural in English. Can you explain my errors  thanks
He also gets antsy and a bit tearful when he is suffering from colic. To ease his pain during colic bouts I put him to sleep on me on his tummy.

Answer

He gets upset and cries when he is suffering from colic. To ease his pain during colic bouts I put him to sleep on on his tummy.

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