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Hi, there
I am emailing a tourism agency about a trip to Boston two months from now. I would like to know if you could proofread it for me. I am kind of acquainted with the person I am emailing, so it is a more or less informal email.
Here it is:
Hi, Peter, how are you? I was in your agency some time ago to close the deal on our one-month stay in Boston and we arranged to meet late this week to go over the final details of my travel insurance and see about the flight date change. As I told you before, I would like to move up the date of my flights two days. I would like to change the dates of both my outbound flight and my return flight. Will it be possible for us to meet this week as agreed? Please, get back to me as soon as possible.
Best regards,
Gabriel
Could you help me?
Thank you!!