Dorota
Is this request grammaticaly ok? Dear Mrs X, I'm writting to ask you about new jobs opportunity in your company. I'am able to start from July. I have interests on any customer-service job. You can find in attachmend my CV. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Greetings, Dorota K. Can I also add something like that? : I have a big experience in a customer-service area both in English and in Polish. I really enjoy this kind of job.
May 15, 2016 8:30 AM
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Dear Mrs X, I am writing to ask you about new job opportunities in your company. I am able to start from July. I am interested in customer service jobs.. You can find my CV attached. I look forward to hearing from you. * look forward sounds more formal* Yours sincerely, *Greetings is for the beginning * Dorota K.
May 15, 2016
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Dear Mrs X, I'm writing for you to ask about new job opportunities in your company. I will be able to start from July. I'm interested in any customer-service job. You can find my CV. in the attachment. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Greetings, Dorota K.
May 15, 2016
It sounds much better :) thank you, you really helped me :) Can I add something like that also: I have a big experience in customer-serivce jobs in German and Polish language and I really enjoy these kinds of jobs.
May 15, 2016
Dear Mrs X, I'm writing to enquire about jobs opportunities within your company. I am available from July and am interested in any customer-service jobs you may have. I have attached my CV, if you have any questions please don't hesitate to contact me and I look forward to hearing from you. (I would write 1-2 sentences briefly outlining why you'd be good for these types of jobs as people don't always bother to open the attachments) Kind regards, Yours sincerely, (is more common in letters rather than an email) Dorota K
May 15, 2016
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