Haenneyさん、こんばんは。敬語という意味では、「いただけますか？」、「いただくことはできますか？」のどちらでも良いと思います。 ただし、先生に直接話をするなら、少しtechnicalですが「いただけないでしょうか？」と言えば、少し表現が柔らかく（聞きやすく）なると思います。 勉強がんばってください。

I don't know about all this, looks like some sort of sick rape scene. With an octopus. Which by the way, no one needs anyway, just cut out whatever this thing is, you're trying to say, its really not necessary. I mean, there's an octopus, there's a girl, what are they Possibly going to say to each other? they need to catch up?