Please help to correct this sentence. Daily delivery product is the most important business line in retail chain stores. About 60% revenue flow in the chain store should give credit to this business line. We are professional daily delivery product supplier, we put major effort into developing this business line, deliver a lot products, such as: Natural Yeast Bread, raw materials of salmon sushi and cod sushi, etc.
Feb 9, 2017 5:55 AM
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Thank you for your remind.
February 9, 2017
Hi Janell, if you'd like someone to correct you, it's best to write these as notebook entries. The "answers" feature is usually used for asking language-related questions, not for written corrections.
February 9, 2017
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