Can check if my sentence is correct?
저는 필리핀에서 살던 도시가 만닐라입니다. 이 도시에서 태어났고 여기도 24년 동안 살았습니다.
What I want to say is: I lived in Manila City in the Philippines. I was born in this city and lived here for 24 years.
Can you help point out my mistakes in grammar, spelling, etc.?
Thank you very much.