Is this natural?
Hi

Is the following sentence natural?

His right attitude towards the job worked magic and he became a big name in his business.

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Is this natural?
Hi

Is the following sentence natural?

His right attitude towards the job worked magic and he became a big name in his business.

Thanks

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It'd be more natural to say "positive attitude" rather than "right attitude."

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It doesn't seem natural to me. It is sometimes helpful to find shorter phrases. When you say "right attitude towards (his) job" you probably mean "work ethic". I suggest: "His work ethic worked magic and he became very successful."

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