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Can you please correct grammar mistakes if any ?
Supersize children's parents must be educated about children's permitted food consumption level in their different stages of life. This essay agrees with this statement because eating large amount of fat food without any control and no exercise in their lifetime.
Oct 20, 2019 2:41 AM
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I would say the following:
Children whose parents supersize food must be educated about children's permitted food consumption level in their different stages of life. This essay agrees with this statement because eating large amounts of fattening food without any control and no exercise (this is not a complete sentence), will have an adverse impact on their long term health.
October 20, 2019
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