JOSEPH
Sentence Help Two sentences I made up: 1. The National Centre for the Performing Arts, better known as the National Grand Theatre, is located next to the Tiananmen Square. 2. The Diwang Building, lesser known to the tourists as the Shun Hing Square, used to be the tallest piece of architecture in Shenzhen. My questions is: 1. if it is okay to say: "lesser known as" or just 'less known as' 2. I don't feel well about the sentences because there're too many 'THE's, making the readers feel redundant. But I'm not sure if it's ok to go without THE when it is used to define the name of a building, street, place etc. Especially when I've already capitalised the first letters to show it is definite, for example, 'Diwang Building', it is necessary to add 'the' in front it as well? I guess it's fine if it is a news report, but technically speaking I'm not sure. Thank you! I appreciate anyone's help. But, to those non-native speakers especially those who are not sure about the real answer: please do not give any irresponsible reply.
Oct 25, 2010 6:48 AM
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I suggest: 1. The National Centre for the Performing Arts, better known as the National Grand Theatre, is adjacent to Tiananmen Square. 2. The Diwang Building, less well known to tourists as Shun Hing Square, used to be the tallest piece of architecture in Shenzhen.
October 25, 2010
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I agree, Neal's rewrites are much clearer and smoother. And "less well known" is probably your best option. To clear up about these "the's"... For "the National Centre for the Performing Arts" and "the National Grand Theatre", these are both descriptive (despite also being names). "Tiananmen Square" is the name of a place... no "the". Diwang Building can have either "the" or no "the". Using "Diwang Building" means you're referring to the building by its name. Using "the Diwang Building" means "the building which is called Diwang". You would use this to compare it with other buildings: "the Diwang building (as opposed to other buildings)..." I wouldn't use "the" for "Shun Hing Square", as I read it as a name, not a description to compare to other squares. Hope that makes things clearer. :) And... "Located next to" is fine, but "adjacent to" is much cleaner sounding, I agree. Not sure about "piece of architecture", as I think of only a chunk of building. Better to say "work of architecture" to indicate the compete building.
October 25, 2010
I agree with Neal, particularly with the 'the's he has deleted.
October 25, 2010
Lesser known is correct
October 25, 2010
1.less known as ... less已经是比较级了,没有lesser 的用法的 2. the 是表示特指的么, 所以用上the会比较好的。 that's is my opinion .
October 25, 2010
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