Hi could you correct my sentences please?
Hi my name is Marie and i'm the assistant of artistic director since 6 months. I'm in charge of poster. I'm very please to present you our posters proposal for the new product line "X".
Hi, my name is Marie and I have been the assistant artistic director for the past 6 months. I am in charge of posters and I am very pleased to present you our posters proposal for the new product line "X".
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I suggest contractions not be used if you intend the writing to sound formal. The Present Perfect Tense (Have + Verb3) is better for saying how long Marie has been the assistant artistic director. ✿
February 17, 2022
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Hi could you correct my sentences please?
Hi my name is Marie and I've been the assistant of the artistic director for 6 months. I'm responsible for poster design. I'm very pleased to present you our poster proposal for the new product line "X".
February 17, 2022
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Hi could you correct my sentences please? Hi my name is Marie.
For the last six months I have been the artistic directors assistant. I'm very
pleased to present to you our poster proposal for ournew product line "X".
February 18, 2022
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In the art or design industry, It's more professional to say "the art director", It's more common to see the job title as "art director" in the U.S.
Hi, my name is Marie and I have been the assistant of the art director for 6 months.....
February 18, 2022
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Hello, my name is Marie and I have been an assistant artistic director at
for 6 months. I take care of the posters. I'm very
. Please present our poster proposal for the new "X" product line.
Keep writing, never give up
February 17, 2022
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