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Changes in the way of Education The past years have witnessed a social phenomenon that an increasing number of people are changing in the way of education.People’s attitudes differ considerably,which give a rise to a heated discussion among the public.As the old proverb goes, "Every coin has two sides"From my perspective,we should not go to extreme for it has both advantages and disadvanges. Quiet a few factors can account for my perspective.Some people deem that change in the way of education play an increasingly sigbficiant role in our life,whichcan not only promote the advancement of society but also learn more knowledge.Others argue that it bring about negative influence on using phone's can hurts our eyes.Based on the points discussed above,personally,I hold the advanced outweigh the disadvanges. From what has been discussed above,the changes in changing in the way of education are developing towards eddciency and convenience.In the Internet age ,we are very lucky to have access to changing in the way of education.
Dec 3, 2021 1:21 PM
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Changes in the way of Education The past years have witnessed a social phenomenon that an increasing number of people are changing their method of education. People’s attitudes differ considerably, which gives rise to a heated discussion among the public. As the old proverb goes, "Every coin has two sides." From my perspective, we should not go to extremes, for it has both advantages and disadvanges. Quite a few factors can account for my perspective.Some people deem that the change in the way of education plays an increasingly significant role in our lives, which can not only promote the advancement of society but also help people learn more knowledge. Others argue that it brings about a negative influence, because using phones can hurt our eyes. Based on the points discussed above, personally I hold that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. From what has been discussed above, the changes in the way of education are developing towards efficiency and convenience. In the Internet age ,we are very lucky to have access to changing methods in education.
Most of your sentences are reasonably correct. However, the big problem from an English exam perspective is that it says nothing. You don't really explain how education has changed - online classes, use of IT in class, maybe teaching in groups etc. Maybe from a CET 4 point of view this is ok!
December 3, 2021
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