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Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movie in my heart. The story is about a couple of different social classes who fall in love aboard on the biggest ship in the world. I love this movie because of many reasons. For example, the director, actor and the actress are very famous, there are many interesting love scenes especially when Jack and Rose share a romantic moment in front of the ship together and also the song "My heart will go on" is so beautiful and meaningful for me.👍❤🎬
Sep 19, 2020 2:06 PM
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Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movies in my heart. The story is about a
couple of different social classes who fall in love on the way to aboard on the biggest ship in the world. I love this movie because of many reasons, for example, the director, actor, and actress are very famous. There are many interesting love
scenes, especially when Jack and Rose share a romantic moment on the ship front, and also the song "My heart will go on" is so beautiful and meaningful to me.👍❤🎬
"in my heart" seems unnecessary in the first sentence.
September 19, 2020
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Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movie in my heart. The story is about a
couple of different social classes who fall in love aboard on the biggest ship
in the world. I love this movie because of many reasons. For example, the
director, actor and the actress are very famous, there are many interesting love
scenes especially when Jack and Rose share a romantic moment in front of the
ship together and also the song "My heart will go on" is so beautiful and
meaningful for me.👍❤🎬
Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movie(s) [from my heart]. The story is about a couple (from) [of] different social classes who fall in love aboard on the biggest ship in the world. I love this movie (for) [because of] many reasons. For example, the director, actor and the actress are very famous, (and) there are many interesting love scenes(,) especially when Jack and Rose share a romantic moment in front of the ship together(.)[and] Also the song "My heart will go on" is so beautiful and meaningful (to)[for] me.👍❤🎬
Changes in (), deletions in [].
Lovely write-up on Titanic. It’s a wonderful movie, and I agree with you about “My heart will go on”. Such a good song!
September 19, 2020
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Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movies. The story is about a
couple of different social classes who fall in love aboard on the biggest ship
in the world. I love this movie due to many reasons. For example, the
director, the actor and the actress are very famous; there are many interesting romantic
scenes; especially, when Jack and Rose share a romantic moment in front of the
ship together, and also the song "My heart will go on" is so beautiful and
meaningful for me.👍❤🎬
Well written. Focus on parallelism.
September 19, 2020
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Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movie in my heart. The story is about a
couple of different social classes who fall in love aboard on the biggest ship
in the world. I love this movie because of many reasons. For example, the
director, actor and the actress are very famous, there are many interesting love
scenes especially when Jack and Rose share a romantic moment in front of the
ship together and also the song "My heart will go on" is so beautiful and
meaningful for me.👍❤🎬
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September 19, 2020
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Titanic is one of my favorite romantic movie in my heart. The story is about a
couple of different social classes who fall in love aboard on the biggest ship
in the world. I love this movie because of many reasons. For example, the
director, actor and the actress are very famous, there are many interesting love
scenes especially when Jack and Rose share a romantic moment in front of the
ship together and also the song "My heart will go on" is so beautiful and
meaningful for me.👍
Its good way but do more express in brefily about this movie which we all understood in clearity form
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