Yulia Streltsova
Report: What are the greatest threats to the environment in your country today? Introduction The principal aim of this report is to provide a description about the greatest threats to the environment in my country and how to prevent it. The final section makes recommendations as to how the situation could be improved. The following are the main threats are described by Biological Diversity: air pollution and deforestation. Air pollution According to World Health Organisation (WHO) around 30 000 people died in Spain from air pollution in 2019. The main cause of pollution in urban areas, where the most people live, is emissions from vehicles. However, in the manufacturing zones coal and oil thermoelectric plants, it is these sources that can reduce air quality. Danger of Desertification The second threat that exists in my country is deforestation. The main cause of this issue provokes from a building construction because of cutting down the trees. Every year urban areas increase whereas Spanish forests decrease in total area. On the other hand, Spanish forests suffer from summer fires every year. It means that Spain has a danger of desertification. Solution Taking all the factors mentioned, I would recommend developing a plan to reduce of using oil and diesel vehicles to avoid getting worse the air quality from a current situation. And the second phase for improving the situations as a most viable solution is develop the reforestation program to save the Spanish forests.
Nov 27, 2022 8:21 PM
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Report: What are the greatest threats to the environment in your country today? Introduction The principal aim of this report is to provide a description of the greatest threats to the environment in my country and how to prevent it. The final section makes recommendations as to how the situation could be improved. The following are the main threats are described by Biological Diversity: air pollution and deforestation. Air pollution According to World Health Organization (WHO) around 30 000 people died in Spain from air pollution in 2019. The main cause of pollution in urban areas, where most people live, is emissions from vehicles. However, in the manufacturing zones of coal and oil thermoelectric plants, it is these sources that can reduce air quality. The danger of Desertification The second threat that exists in my country is deforestation. The main cause of this issue provokes building construction because of cutting down trees. Every year urban areas increase whereas Spanish forests decrease in total area. On the other hand, Spanish forests suffer from summer fires every year. It means that Spain has a danger of desertification. Solution Taking all the factors mentioned, I would recommend developing a plan to reduce of using oil and diesel vehicles to avoid getting worse the air quality from the current situation. And the second phase for improving the situation as a most viable solution is to develop a reforestation program to save the Spanish forests.
November 27, 2022
Report: What are the greatest threats to the environment in your country today? Introduction The principal aim of this report is to provide a description about the greatest threats to the environment in my country and how to prevent them. The final section makes recommendations as to how the situation could be improved. The following consists of (“the following” is singular & therefore needs to conjugated into the 3rd person — though just using the verb “be” on its own here isn’t wrong, ‘consists of’ sounds better & more natural to me) the main threats are described by Biological Diversity: air pollution and deforestation. Air pollution According to World Health Organisation (WHO) around 30 000 people died in Spain from air pollution in 2019. The main cause of pollution in urban areas, where most/the majority of people live, are emissions from vehicles. However, in the manufacturing zones, coal and oil thermoelectric plants, it is these sources that can reduce air quality. Danger of Desertification The second threat that exists in my country is deforestation. The main cause of this issue stems from a building/construction site because of cutting down the trees. Every year urban areas increase, whereas the total area of Spanish forests decreases. On the other hand, Spanish forests suffer from summer fires every year. This means that Spain has a danger of desertification. Solution Taking all the factors mentioned, I would recommend developing a plan to reduce the use of oil and diesel vehicles to avoid the air quality getting worse from the current situation. And the second phase for improving the situation, as the most/more viable solution is to develop the reforestation program to save the Spanish forests.
November 27, 2022
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