You rent an apartment and you are quite happy with it but you want to suggest a renovation. Write a letter about your suggestion. In your letter, you should tell: – Your appreciation of current condition – What is the renovation and why? – What is the benefits of your suggestion? Dear Ms Li, I am the resident of flat 501. I am writing to express my appreciation of the current condition. Your apartment is conveniently located in the downtown area, which is easily accessible for us. It is a terrific apartment for my family. The problem is that a tile in the kitchen fell on my mother's ankle, which caused an injury. We checked the others and many of them are loose. When we pulled them off the wall, we could clearly see bare spots on the tile where no adhesive even touched the tile. To avoid severe injuries happening, can you please renovate it? By removing the tiles which are not glued on properly and reinstalling them with a better glue. I believe it will also benefit future residents when we leave next year. Thank you very much. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Xin

You rent an apartment and you are quite happy with it but you want to suggest a renovation. Write a letter about your suggestion. In your letter, you should tell: – Your appreciation of current condition – What is the renovation and why? – What is the benefits of your suggestion? Dear Ms Li, I am the resident of flat 501. I am writing to express my appreciation of current condition. (You need to change these words - I am writing to give you my opinion of its current state) Your apartment is conveniently located in the downtown area, which is easily accessible for us. It is a terrific apartment for my family. (The location does not relate to the condition) The problem is that a tile in the kitchen felt down and hit my mother's ankle which caused her an injury. We checked the others and found that many of them were loose. When we pulled them off the wall, we could clearly see bare spots on the tiles where no adhesive had been used. To avoid anymore severe injuries happening, can you please renovate it? I suggest removing the tiles which are not pasted well on the wall and putting them back with a better glue. I believe it will also benefit residents in the future after we leave next year. Thank you very much. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Xin