Dear staff According to the financial statement, the profit margin of this quarter has inceased by 20 percent, because of your excellent services, our big client placed extra orders. In order to thank

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Dear staff According to the financial statement, the profit margin of this quarter has inceased by 20 percent, because of your excellent services, our big client placed extra orders. In order to thank your contirbution, we would like to offer each of you either 1.000 pounds bonus or three paid leave days. Ann

Aug 30, 2022 8:22 AM

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Dear staff According to our financial statements, the profit margin for this quarter has inceased by 20 percent. Because of your excellent service, our biggest client placed extra orders. In order to thank you for your contribution, we would like to offer each of you either a 1,000 pound bonus or three paid leave days. Ann

I’ll have the thousand pounds!

August 30, 2022

Dear staff Our latest financial statement indicates a twenty percent profit margin increase (for this quarter). Thanks to your excellent services, our biggest client placed extra orders. As a reward, I would like to offer each of you either a 1.000 pounds bonus or three days of paid leave. Ann

Goof work, I've put in parenthesis a section that is not necessary. That can help you reduce your word count since you were slightly above the limit.

August 30, 2022

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