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Today I went to the hair salon for the first time in a couple of months and had my hair dyed pink brown.
I fell asleep while they were dying my hair.
I feel much better and refreshed😊
Jun 15, 2024 5:00 AM
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Today I went to a hair salon for the first time in a couple of months and had my hair dyed in pink brown.
I fell asleep while they were dying my hair / while I had my hair dyed.
I feel much better and refreshed now 😊
June 15, 2024
Today I went to the hair salon for the first time in a couple of months／in a while and dyed
my hair pink brown. I fell asleep while they were dying my hair. I feel
much better and refreshed😊
よく書けてますよ✨
正直に直すところが全然ありませんでしたが、
自然な英語になるようにちょっと置き換えました🤏🏻
ピンクブラウンは最近流行ってて素敵な色なんですね。チェリーワインみたいです🍷🍒 スッキリできてよかったですね💇🏻♀️
無理のない範囲で英語の勉強頑張ってくださいね！
応援してます🙏🏻
June 15, 2024
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