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Towa
Hello,every one.
Today,it's rainy.I don't want to school‥
But when finish school,I'm going to shopping in Minatomirai. There is a lot of mall and restrant at the place. Howere I have a lttlie mony,so need save mony.
Thanks for reading my post.
Apr 23, 2025 5:19 AM
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Hello every one.
Today it's rainy and I don't want to go to school‥
But after school I'm going to go shopping in Minatomirai. There are a lot of malls and restaurants there. However, I don't have a lot of money, so I need to save
Thanks for reading my post.
Apr 23, 2025 6:57 AM
Hello, everyone.
It's rainy today. I don't want to go to school‥.
But once my classes are over, I'm going to go shopping in Minatomirai. There are a lot of malls and restaurants there but I only have little money, so I need to save money.
Thanks for reading my post.
Apr 23, 2025 9:32 AM
Hello,every one. Today it's rainy.I don't want to go to school‥ But when I finish
school,I'm going shopping in Minatomirai. There are a lot of malls and restaurants
there. Howere I have only a little money ,so I need save money. Thanks for reading
my post.
I hope the corrections help. Well done for trying. Sadly you made lots of spelling errors, so keep working hard on this. Good luck.
Apr 23, 2025 6:56 AM
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