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I would like to go to Australia because my friend is living there. I want to go to a foreign country’s supermarket. I think it is bigger than Japanese ones. And there will be many kinds of products there. I am interested in foreign products. I hope I can go someday. I have to save money.
Jul 1, 2025 1:12 AM
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I would like to go to Australia because my friend is living there. I want to go
to a foreign country’s supermarket. I think it is bigger than the Japanese ones, and
there will be many kinds of products there. I am interested in foreign products.
I hope I can go someday. I have to save money.
英語の素晴らしい使用、あなたが言いたかったことは明らかでしたが、唯一の問題は句読点の使用でした。 文章にカンマを持たせたのは、ピリオドがあまりないようにするためで、カンマを使うときには、トートを結びやすくするためです。 全体的に、あなたは素晴らしい仕事をしました、頑張ってください!
Jul 1, 2025 3:42 AM
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