Could you please help me correct the following sentences? Thank you in advance. I heard two magpies chirping when I woke up this morning. In China we have a saying, which says something lucky will h

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Could you please help me correct the following sentences? Thank you in advance. I heard two magpies chirping when I woke up this morning. In China we have a saying, which says something lucky will happen when you hear the voice of magpies.So I am looking forward to meeting beautiful things or pepole today.Maybe another nice student？I hope so.

Apr 18, 2024 10:31 PM

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Could you please help me correct the following sentences? Thank you in advance. I heard two magpies chirping when I woke up this morning. In China we have a saying where something lucky will happen when you hear the chirping/sound of magpies. So I am looking forward to encountering beautiful things or people today. Maybe another nice student？I hope so.

"have a saying which says..." is correct, but a little repetitive. "Meeting people" is okay. But "meeting beautiful things" does not sound right. Maybe you translated from Chinese 遇到? Better to use the word "encountering" for "things."

Apr 22, 2024 12:21 AM

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