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Ayaka
2022/10/31
Good afternoon everyone. Have you ever made a big mistake in your life? Well, I have. Today, I would like to tell you about a bad experience that taught me an important lesson.
I gained 5 kg last winter. There are two causes.
One is because my eating habits have collapsed. After my part-time job, I ate a lot of rice and sweets at night. The two stayed at home the whole time and did not move my bodies. I didn't get tired so I couldn't sleep well at night.
I went back to my parent's house for summer vacation. So I ate well-balanced meal and went to bed at 10 p.m. at night. I played badminton one in another week and went to the sauna. As a result, I was able to lose 5kg in 2 months.
I learned that a balanced diet, good sleep, and moderate exercise are good for the body.
Thank-you for reading!
Oct 31, 2022 3:25 AM
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2022/10/31
Good afternoon everyone. Have you ever made a big mistake in your life? Well, I have. Today, I would like to tell you about a bad experience that taught me an important lesson.
I gained 5 kg last winter. There were two reasons.
First, it was because my eating habits drastically changed. After my part-time job, I ate a lot of rice and sweets at night. Second, I stayed at home the whole time and did not do any exercise. I didn't get tired so I couldn't sleep well at night.
I went back to my parent's house for summer vacation. So I ate well-balanced meals and went to bed at 10 p.m. at night. I played badminton every other week and went to the sauna. As a result, I was able to lose 5kg in 2 months.
I learned that a balanced diet, good sleep and moderate exercise are good for the body.
Thank you for reading!
October 31, 2022
1
2022/10/31
Good afternoon everyone. Have you ever made a big mistake in your life? Well, I have. Today, I would like to tell you about a bad experience that taught me an important lesson.
I gained 5 kg last winter. There are two causes.
First, is because my eating habits have collapsed. After my part-time job, I ate a lot of rice and sweets at night. Second, I stayed at home the whole time and did not move my body. I didn't get tired so I couldn't sleep well at night.
I went back to my parent's house for the summer vacation. So I ate well-balanced meals and went to bed at 10 p.m. at night. I played badminton once a week and went to the sauna. As a result, I was able to lose 5kg in 2 months.
I learned that a balanced diet, good sleep, and moderate exercise are good for the body.
Thank-you for reading!
That's a great piece of writing Ayaka, good job!
October 31, 2022
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Ayaka
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English, Japanese
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English
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