Jonas Naumann
The most important hobby of mine is programming computers in a variety of fields. I am into building websites and web applications. I'm currently building a website for my uncle for his train club. His old website wasn't built for the future and not responsive at all. I've also developed a school quiz web application in which students have the possibility to learn and teachers are able to enter questions and create as many quizzes as they want. That was the origin of my hobby. I do not only like software, but hardware. If I don't know about a component of a computer or how the parts interact with eachother, I will research the topic in my free time. I'm currently in the first of the three years of a traineeship with teory and practice and we are also learning those topics there but we will only scratch the surface of how components work. I'm a technical enthusiast and that's not enough for me. But not only comuters are my hobby. In the summer in my leisure time I ride my bicycle on tours on a long way in a park. On the same bike way, which is near to where I live, I am also doing inline skating which is a great activity to stay fit, because I'm sitting eight hours in front of the computer in the traineeship. What do you think about my hobbies and what hobbies do you have?
Mar 29, 2023 4:47 AM
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My greatest hobby is programming computers [in a variety of fields | Do you mean that you're interested in many aspects of this? Perhaps = in a variety of ways]. I am into building websites and web applications. I'm currently building a website for my uncle for his train club. His old website wasn't built for the future and wasn't responsive at all. I've also developed a school quiz web application in which students have the possibility to learn and teachers are able to enter questions and create as many quizzes as they want. That was the origin of my hobby. I don't just like software, I like hardware too [more natural]. If I don't know about a component of a computer or how the parts interact with each other, I will research the topic in my free time. I'm currently in the first of three years of a traineeship, covering theory and practice, and we study this there but we will only scratch the surface of how components work. I'm a technical enthusiast and that's not enough for me. Aside from computers, in the summer I go on long bike rides in the park in my free time. On the same cycle route, near where I live, I am also inline skating, which is a great activity to stay fit because I'm sitting in front of the computer eight hours every day for the traineeship. What do you think about my hobbies and what hobbies do you have?
Hi! Well done - a strong piece of writing. You clearly have a good level of English. I corrected a couple of typos and expressions but mostly I've made suggestions about how you can make your text sound more natural. When I was at high school I made websites too and tried my hand at coding more broadly but I drew the line at hardware.
March 29, 2023
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