Maxim
- It's time to OWN UP TO those HEINOUS crimes you've been committing. - It resembled a witty move in the beginning, but turned into a rather risky ESCAPADE. - At first sight a quirky campaign of 'selling' items GRATIS turned out to be an ingenious marketing move. - For a couple of months they managed to SMUGGLE pounds of stolen coffee of the highest quality. - The new Avatar film got fascinated responses for its CRACKERJACK visual effects. - Although the principal of our school was harsh and quick on detentions for just a minute's late arrival, our physics teacher could even CONDONE us skipping lessons, provided that we'll be prepared for the tests. - He disreputed our whole meeting with his SLEAZY speach. - You may call it "don't touch what works" or "don't try to gild the lily", but there's still utterly no point in revising this script.
Mar 31, 2023 6:21 PM
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- It's time to OWN UP TO those HEINOUS crimes you've been committing. - It resembled a witty move in the beginning/initially appeared to be a witty move, but (it) turned into a rather risky ESCAPADE. - At first sight a quirky campaign of 'selling' items GRATIS turned out to be an ingenious marketing move. - For a couple of months they managed to SMUGGLE pounds of stolen coffee of the highest quality. - The new Avatar film got fascinated responses/received fascinated reviews(?) for its CRACKERJACK visual effects. ["Fascinated" doesn't seem quite right here, but I'm not sure what the intended meaning is.] - Although the principal of our school was harsh and quick on/with detentions for just a minute's late arrival, our physics teacher could even CONDONE us skipping lessons, provided that we were prepared for the tests. - He disreputed [<-- incorrect usage of "disreputed". Perhaps "disrupted"?] our whole meeting with his SLEAZY speech. - You may say, "don't touch what works," or "don't try to gild the lily," but there's still utterly no point in revising this script. [I'm not sure if "don't touch what works" is a common phrase, but "don't fix what isn't broken" is.]
March 31, 2023
It's time to ADMIT TO those AWFUL crimes you've been committing. It seemed like a CLEVER move at first, but turned into a rather DANGEROUS ADVENTURE. Initially, a quirky campaign of giving away items for free turned out to be a GENIUS marketing strategy. For a couple of months, they managed to SMUGGLE pounds of stolen, high-quality coffee. The new Avatar film received EXCELLENT reviews for its SUPERB visual effects. Although the principal of our school was strict and would give detention for being just a minute late, our physics teacher was more lenient and ALLOWED us to skip classes, provided we were prepared for the tests. He ruined our whole meeting with his INAPPROPRIATE speech. You could call it "if it ain't broke, don't fix it" or "don't try to improve something that's already good," but there's no real reason to revise this script.
It's important to use appropriate and accurate vocabulary in your writing to convey your message clearly. Some of the words used in your message were not quite appropriate, such as "heinous" which means extremely wicked or villainous and "condone" which means to approve or sanction. Additionally, some sentences were a bit awkward or difficult to understand, such as the sentence about the physics teacher. Consider simplifying your sentences and using more precise language to make your message more effective. Finally, be careful with the tone of your writing, as some words may be perceived as offensive or inappropriate in certain contexts. Keep practicing and refining your writing skills to improve your communication!
April 8, 2023
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