Today is rest day，but I have a meeting at three o'clock. The weather is sunny ,but I can't go out to play with my friends. A lots of people have a fever recently.

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Jul 25, 2024 3:29 PM

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Today is rest day，but I have a meeting at three o'clock. The weather is sunny ,but I can't go out to play with my friends. A lots of people have a fever recently.

Today is my day off. A lot of people have fevers recently. The first correction is not really wrong. But it makes you sound foreign. Everything you wrote was well organized and totally understandable.

July 25, 2024

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