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It's St. Patrick's Day. I spent the day relaxing at home with the best company – my MeeMaw! We even got crafty, snipping out a whole bunch of shamrocks from paper, coloring and turning them into makeshift badges with tape. Consider everyone I meet today officially shamrock-ified! Speaking of green things, I can't wait to dig into that Guinness Beef pie later. If I remember correctly, it was a little greenish, probably been added pesto. Dad even skipped lunch in anticipation! Happy St. Patrick's Day to you!
Mar 17, 2024 9:28 AM
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It's St. Patrick's Day. I spent the day relaxing at home with the best company –
my MeeMaw! We even got crafty, snipping out a whole bunch of shamrocks from
paper, coloring and turning them into makeshift badges with tape. Consider
everyone I meet today officially shamrock-ified! Speaking of green things, I
can't wait to dig into that Guinness Beef pie later. If I remember correctly, it
was a little greenish, probably with added pesto. Dad even skipped lunch in
anticipation! Happy St. Patrick's Day to you!
Have a great day!
March 17, 2024
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It's St. Patrick's Day. I spent the day relaxing at home with the best company – my MeeMaw! We even got crafty, snipping out a whole bunch of shamrocks from paper, coloring them, and turning them into makeshift badges with tape. Consider everyone I meet today officially shamrock-ified! Speaking of green things, I can't wait to dig into that Guinness Beef pie later. If I remember correctly, it had a slightly greenish hue, probably from added pesto. Dad even skipped lunch in anticipation! Happy St. Patrick's Day to you!
The grammar in the passage is mostly correct, but there are a few improvements that could be made for clarity and correctness.
Changes Made:
- Added a comma after "coloring" for clarity.
- Clarified "probably been added pesto" to "probably from added pesto" for better grammar.
- Changed "it was" to "it had" for smoother flow and correctness.
March 17, 2024
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The Tim じぁん!!!
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
Learning Language
English
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