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Today is rainy day. I was delay but made it to class!!
I didn't bring my lunch today, so I bought a 400 yen hamburger at the purchase. It was delicious!! When I left the college, the rain had stopped and it was very hot. Also, It was very sunny, so I thought I should have brought sunscreen.
Jun 25, 2025 5:58 AM
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Today is rainy. I was delayed but made it to class!
I didn't bring my lunch today, so I bought a 400 yen hamburger at the canteen/shop. It was delicious! When I left college, the rain had stopped and it was very hot and sunny, so I should have applied/worn sunscreen.
Jun 25, 2025 11:46 AM
Today is a rainy day. I was delayed but made it to class!! I didn't bring my lunch
today, so I bought a 400 yen hamburger at the purchase. It was delicious!! When
I left the college, the rain had stopped and it was very hot. Also, It was very
sunny, so I thought I should have brought sunscreen.
Wow, the weather changed so quickly!
🧠 Becareful with your articles like "a rainy day" and your past tense.
- Teacher Dani 🌷
Jun 25, 2025 9:03 AM
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