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Good afternoon everyone. I drove first time after getting driving licence. It was very scary and nervous. It is because it is rainy today. I went to my dog's hospital. It is near to my house, so I'm not tired. I'm not good at driving yet. I want to be a good driver.
Jul 9, 2023 7:40 AM
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Good afternoon everyone. I drove for the first time (today, yesterday, etc.) after getting my driving licence. I was very scared and nervous, because it is rainy today. I went to my dog's hospital. It is near to my house, so I'm not tired. I'm not good at driving yet. I want to be a good driver.
Good job. Notes: 1) Second sentence: It's not wrong, but most people would also say when (today, yesterday, etc.) they drove 2) The word "nervous" describes a person, so "it...was nervous" doesn't make sense; I changed the sentence so you are talking about how you felt but you could also say "It was very scary and made me nervous..."
July 9, 2023
Good afternoon everyone. I have driven for the first time since getting driving licence. This
was very scary and nervous. That is because it was rainy today. I went to my dog's
hospital. It is close to my house, so I was not tired. I can’t drive drive well yet.
I want to be a good driver.
July 9, 2023
Good afternoon everyone. I drove first time after getting driving licence. It
was very scary and nervous. It is because it is rainy today. I went to my pet
hospital. It is near to my house, so I'm not tired. I'm not good at driving yet.
I want to be a good driver.
July 9, 2023
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