My party!
Yesterday, I gone to a party with my friend David. He studies english with me at university. He wanted to be introduced to Lucy who he fancied. David and I sat in the corner of the room. He didn't make the first move to go and see her. He waited for so long to tell her that he had a crush on her. He took a drink to get some energy and after a few minutes of endless hesitation, he walked to her. David remained mute. She gave a hint of a smile, noticing David blushing. She asked him if he enjoyed the party. He whispered ' Yes ' and had a glance at me. I winked at him. That was it. Feeling reassured and confident, he told her which feelings he was experiencing. She suddenly sullened fell silent. She looked embarrassed. She could hardly say a word but after alittle seconds, she said : ' I'm sorry to deceive you but actually I fancy Sebastian ' . David fainted : ' a friend in need is a friend indeed ' !
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