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WHO hopes COVID-19 vaccination ‘underway in every country in next 100 days’ I’m trying to pick up a few lines from this article to paraphrase them! I am not so sure if things i write down are all right! so what do you think about these? Tedros Adhanom Ghebreyesus highlighted that efforts should be made to ensure that middle and low-income countries as just as equally protected -> Tedros stressed we should make every effort to make middle and low-income countries equally protected. According to the WHO, 38 out of the 46 countries that have begun inoculation are high-income countries -> most of countries that have already started roll out of vaccination are well-off
2021年1月17日 08:21
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WHO hopes COVID-19 vaccination ‘underway in every country in next 100 days’ I’m trying to pick up a few lines from this article to paraphrase them! I am not so sure if things i write down are all right! so what do you think about these? Tedros Adhanom Ghebreyesus highlighted that efforts should be made to ensure that middle and low-income countries as just as equally protected -> Tedros stressed that we should make efforts to make middle and low-income countries equally protected. According to the WHO, 38 out of the 46 countries that have begun inoculation are high-income countries -> Most countries that have already started to roll out vaccination are well-off.
Good job! Very minimal mistakes. :)
2021年1月18日
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