Kseniia
A second attempt ) _____________________ Psychologists and parents these days oftentimes discuss various ways to make children and adolescents read. To solve this issue, foremost, it is necessary to identify the reasons. One of the reason why children have lost their interest in books might be a lack of attention and support from parents. The modern rhythm of life dictates its own conditions and children are often left to themselves, while their parents are busy making money. Another reason why young people do not find a reading exciting is a myriad of entertainment online-resources, such as social media or online-games. For example, the popularity of Instagram among children and teenagers, have significantly increased for a last decade, that distracts them from education, in particular reading tutorials and classical books. There are two effective solutions to get the new generation to read. Firstly, parents should be a role model for their offspring, try to find an opportunity to spend more time with their families and encourage the natural kids' aspiration to cognition. Psychologists say, that children adopt behaviors and habits from adults, if they spend enough of free time with their parents. Secondly, adults should be mentors for kids and show them opportunities provided by the Internet, tell them about such resources such as e-libraries. Examples are known, when lecturers offer audio-books or scientific online-publications their students, and it helps to inspire them to read more. In conclusion, adults play a significant role in fostering love of books and instilling positive habits such as reading. It means, parents should set aside time for reading with children, and teachers should help their learners do not get lost in the ocean of information.
Feb 28, 2021 1:04 PM
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A second attempt ) _____________________ Psychologists and parents these days often discuss various ways to make❊ children and adolescents read. [❊OR to encourage . .to read] To solve this issue it is necessary to identify the reasons /causes. One of the reasons (why) children have lost their interest in books might be a lack of attention and support from parents. The modern rhythm of life dictates its own conditions and children are often left to themselves, while their parents are busy making money. Another reason why young people do not find reading exciting /interesting is a myriad /wealth of entertainment online-resources, such as social media or online-games. For example, the popularity of Instagram among children and teenagers has significantly increased [for a]over the last decade, [that] distracting them from education, in particular reading tutorials and classical books. There are two effective solutions to the issue of getting the new generation to read. Firstly, parents should be a role model for their offspring /children, try to find an opportunity to spend more time with their families, and encourage their natural curiosity [aspiration to cognition]. Psychologists say that children adopt the behaviour and habits [from] of adults if they spend enough of their (free) time with their parents. Secondly, adults should be mentors for [kids] children /young people, and show them opportunities provided by the Internet, tell them about such resources as e-libraries. Examples /Cases are known [when] in which lecturers offer audio-books or scientific online-publications to their students, and it helps to inspire them to read more. In conclusion, adults play a significant role in fostering a love of books and instilling positive habits such as reading. It means that parents should set aside time for reading with children, and teachers should help their learners not to get lost in the ocean of information.
Feb 28, 2021 6:22 PM
A second attempt ) _____________________ Psychologists and parents these days oftentimes discuss various ways to make children and adolescents read. To solve this issue, foremost, it is necessary to identify the reasons. One of the reason why children have lost their interest in books might be a lack of attention and support from parents. The modern rhythm of life dictates its own conditions and children are often left to themselves, while their parents are busy making money. Another reason why young people do not find a reading exciting is a myriad of entertainment online-resources, such as social media or online-games. For example, the popularity of Instagram among children and teenagers, have significantly increased for a last decade, that distracts them from education, in particular reading tutorials and classical books. There are two effective solutions to get the new generation to read. Firstly, parents should be a role model for their offspring, try to find an opportunity to spend more time with their families and encourage the natural kids' aspiration to cognition. Psychologists say, that children adopt behaviors and habits from adults, if they spend enough of free time with their parents. Secondly, adults should be mentors for kids and show them opportunities provided by the Internet, tell them about such resources such as e-libraries. Examples are known, when lecturers offer audio-books or scientific online-publications their students, and it helps to inspire them to read more. In conclusion, adults play a significant role in fostering love of books and instilling positive habits such as reading. It means, parents should set aside time for reading with children, and teachers should help their learners do not get lost in the ocean of information.
Fantastic, much better! This flows really well. The only thing I would change is 'aspiration to cognition'. Sometimes simpler is better. Maybe ...willingness to learn.
Feb 28, 2021 1:14 PM
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Kseniia
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English, Russian
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