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I love watching tv shows, especially Korean tv shows. There's one particular show that I always watch, it's called "The Return of Superman". It's a show where fathers are given 48hours to take care of their children alone. It's entertaining and educative at the same time because I think we can learn about parenting from the show. Another show that I love to watch is "Knowing bros". The concept of the show is a bit abstract, so it's difficult to explain what kind of show it is. It's more like a talk show, but it's not like those ordinary talk shows we often see on tv, because they play a lot of games too. And what I really like from the show is it's hilarious, it never fails to make me laugh a lot everytime I watch the show. ____________ #4 Hi! feedback and correction are always welcome. Tysm!
Feb 19, 2021 4:36 PM
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I love watching tv shows, especially Korean tv shows. There's one particular show that I always watch, it's called "The Return of Superman". It's a show where fathers are given 48hours to take care of their children alone. It's entertaining and educational at the same time because I think we can learn about parenting from the show. Another show that I love to watch is "Knowing bros". The concept of the show is a bit abstract, so it's difficult to explain what kind of show it is. It's more like a talk show, but it's not like those ordinary talk shows we often see on tv, because they play a lot of games too. And what I really like about the show is that it's hilarious, it never fails to make me laugh a lot everytime I watch the show. ____________ #4 Hi! feedback and correction are always welcome. Tysm!
Your writing sounds really natural!
February 19, 2021
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