Randhawa Kaur
Hello everyone i am Randhawa.... on weekend i have planed to visit golden temple... which is stituated in amritsar..... It is most visited site in amritsar.... After pay obesss i would like to go for shopping with my friends....
Feb 21, 2021 9:44 AM
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Hello everyone. I am Randhawa. I have planned to visit the Golden Temple at the weekend. It is stituated in Amritsar, and is the most visited site there. After paying obeisance, I would like to go shopping with my friends.
I guess obeisance is the word you want, but it is a bit unusual. I have been to the Golden Temple, it's amazing. I stayed the night at the temple.
Feb 21, 2021 9:58 AM
Hello everyone i am Randhawa.... on weekend i have planed to visit golden temple... which is stituated in amritsar..... It is most visited site in amritsar.... After pay obesss i would like to go for shopping with my friends....
Why i could not use on weekend..... it is incorrect instead of at weekend
Feb 21, 2021 10:09 AM
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Randhawa Kaur
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English
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