Johana
Hi Community, Could someone help me to correct my writing? I have been thinking about leaving this country latety, and that is because of several reasons. Firstly, the situation after the pandemic period has been gettin worse. For intance, last year's inflation is just incredible, buy food and getting other kind of things is every day more expensive. Our currency was one of the most devalued currency in the world last year, so that mens It is too expensive to import supplies, therefore It is harder to the basics. Secondly, I do not feel saved living here any more. Currenly, when things are getting back to normal, crime rates have incresed significantly, I don't go out frequently. The last reason why I want to leave this country is because I would like to move out to and English Speaking country, my work allows me to do it and it is definitely time to get my English one step up. Thanks.
Jan 21, 2022 2:15 PM
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I've been considering leaving this country recently for a variety of reasons. To begin with, the situation has deteriorated since the outbreak. For example, last year's inflation was unbelievable; buying food and other necessities became more expensive every day. Last year, our currency was one of the most undervalued in the world, making it prohibitively expensive for males to import commodities, making it difficult to meet basic needs. Second, I no longer feel safe living here. I don't go out very often now that things are coming back to normal and crime rates have increased dramatically. Last but not least, I want to leave this country because I want to move to an English-speaking country; my job allows me to do so, and it is past time to improve my English. Thanks!
January 22, 2022
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Hi Johana - Just a few minor edits/suggestions to consider. Keep up the good work! I have been thinking about leaving this country lately for several reasons. First, the situation after the pandemic period has gotten worse. For instance, last year's inflation was just incredible. Buying food and other items is more expensive every day. Our currency was one of the most devalued currencies in the world last year which means it is too expensive to import supplies, therefore it is harder to purchase the basics. Secondly, I do not feel safe living here any more. As things are getting back to normal, crime rates have increased significantly. I don't go out very often. The last reason why I want to leave this country is because I would like to move to an English-speaking country. My work allows me to do this and it is definitely time to take my English one step up.
January 21, 2022
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Joanna, if you move this to the EXERCISES section, it will be easier for people to correct.
January 21, 2022
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