Mari Kim
When it comes to emotions, Morrie and Mitch have different opinions. Mitch says, even though we love someone very much, we are hesitant to express our emotions because we don't know how it affects our relationships. I mean, if the one I confessed doesn't have the same emotions as me, he might don't feel comfortable and end up breaking up with me. On the flip side, Morrie says, we shouldn't avoid emotions even negative ones. As I said earlier, if I have someone whom I love so much, Morrie encourages us to confess them not to avoid it. If they don't feel comfortable and refuse to meet you anymore, that's it. In this case, you will learn how we feel is grief, and that emotion might make you feel sad and cry. But next time when you go through the same situation, you could recognize the same emotions you had experienced before will come to you again, and you will not let those grief control you. In other words, you could put them aside and try not to take them seriously. Which person do you agree with, Mitch or Morrie? Could you please make my writing sound more natural? Thank you for your time and help.
Aug 13, 2022 9:11 AM
Answers · 1
Hi Mari, there are a few changes I would make to this to make it sound more natural and to be correct. Will you post this in Exercises? The corrections will be easier to see there.
August 13, 2022
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