Shu
I found the news about the Paris climate accord a few days ago on the internet. The news said the United States rejoined the Paris climate accord 107 days after they left. I'm really grateful to hear this news because I'm really interested in the environment. I suppose that the situation of the environment is getting worse day by day, and America needs to be an example for other countries to follow. I don’t know if the target of cutting the emissions to keep warming below 3.6 degrees will be achieved, but we need to do it right now to cut the emissions for our beautiful planet.
Feb 24, 2021 4:36 PM
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A few days ago, I found out about the news regarding the Paris climate accord on the internet. The news said the United States rejoined the Paris climate accord 107 days after they left. I'm really grateful to hear this news because I'm really interested in the environment. I suppose that the environmental situation is getting worse day by day, and America needs to be an example for other countries to follow. I don’t know if the target of cutting the emissions to keep warming below 3.6 degrees will be achieved, but we need to do it right now to cut the emissions for our beautiful planet.
Good job, Shu!! This is almost perfect and my editing was mostly to improve clarity. I agree that cutting emissions is necessary.
Feb 24, 2021 5:55 PM
I found out the news about the Paris climate accord a few days ago on the internet. The news said the United States rejoined the Paris climate accord 107 days after they left. I'm really grateful to hear this news because I'm really interested in the environment. I suppose that the environmental situation is getting worse day by day, and America needs to be an example for other countries to follow. I don’t know if the target of cutting the emissions to keep warming below 3.6 degrees will be achieved, but we need to do it right now to cut the emissions for our beautiful planet.
I think it’s more a case of the Paris agreement being the bare minimum that everyone can agree on, and the last president pulling out to spite his predecessor 🙃
Feb 24, 2021 5:46 PM
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Shu
Language Skills
English, Japanese
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English