JENNY
Can you correct this? 2/16 What is best improtant things for you? My improtant thinks is MY HEALTHY. Healthy mean are my body condition and my mental is normal. Sometime I do act more activity that is not my normal condition. If I feel that I have to breath slowly, using nose and mouth. Count 10 to 0. Close my eyes and ears cover my hands. Then I can countrol my act. Do constantly, Do not overact. You are enough to do. You are always do great JENNY.
Feb 15, 2021 7:49 PM
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Can you correct this? 2/16 What is the most important thing for you? My most important thing is my health. Being healthy means my body and my mind are normal. Sometimes I do more activity, this is not my normal condition. If I feel like that, I have to breathe slowly using my nose and mouth. Count down from 10 to 0. Close my eyes and cover my ears with my hands. Then I can control myself. Do things in the same way, do not overdo them. You are doing enough. You are always doing great JENNY.
Well done Jenny. Keep practising and share your writing here. I think we all agree that health is very important!
Feb 15, 2021 8:06 PM
What is best improtant things for you? The most important thing for me is my health. Healthy means my body condition and my mental health is normal. Sometimes I do act more activity that is not my normal condition. If I feel that I have to breathe slowly, using nose and mouth. Count down from 10 to 0. Close my eyes and ears cover my hands. Then I can control my act. Do constantly, Do not overact/panic. You are enough to do. You are always doing great JENNY.
Good writing! Health is the noun and healthy is the adjective.
Feb 15, 2021 8:03 PM
Can you correct this? 2/16 What are the most improtant things for you? My most important thing is MY HEALTH. Health means my body and mental condition are normal. Sometimes I do more activity that is not my normal condition. If I feel that I have to breathe slowly, using my nose and mouth. Count from 10 to 0. Close my eyes and ears cover my hands. Then I can countrol my act. Do constantly, Do not overact. You are doing enough. You are always doing great JENNY.
I tried my best to translate how I would write it as a native speaker without changing too much, you’re doing great keep it up!!
Feb 15, 2021 8:02 PM
Can you correct this? 2/16 What is best improtant things for you? My improtant thinks is MY HEALTHY. Healthy mean are my body condition and my mental is normal. Sometime I do act more activity that is not my normal condition. If I feel that I have to breath slowly, using nose and mouth. Count 10 to 0. Close my eyes and ears cover my hands. Then I can countrol my act. Do constantly, Do not overact. You are enough to do. You are always doing great JENNY.
Feb 15, 2021 7:52 PM
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JENNY
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