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I'm going to read the books which were on sale that I bought last year. The book is It's Okay, You're Just Different by Kim Doo Eung. I've been reading this book since last month. Yeah, I'm a professional procrastinator🥲. Let's just finish the book on this weekend. The book is about how mother raised their children who is becoming fabulous person. You might know these people. They are Thomas Alva Edison, Picasso, Einstein, etc. Beside that, maybe I'm going to do some exercise, such as running and playing badminton. I've started playing badminton since 2 weeks. Don't expect too much. I'm a noob player. I'm so grateful my friends are so kind and patient to teach me how to play badminton properly. I don't even know the rules😄. I've realized that my skin gets much smoother and the stretch marks are going to dissapear. That's cool. I thought I already loss some weight but sadly it's still same😅. Nevertheless, my skin will be glowing up and I feel happier. To be honest, my psychologist has diagnosed major depression to me. She has recommended me to do some exercise. At first, I don't believe it but I've been doing what she has said and I think it's working!
Feb 26, 2021 7:28 AM
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This weekend, I’m going to read the books that I bought last year on sale. The book is “It's Okay, You're Just Different” by Kim Doo Eung. I've been reading this book since last month. Yeah, I'm a professional procrastinator🥲. Let me just finish the book this weekend. The book is about how some mothers raised their children that ended up becoming fabulous people. You might know these people. They are Thomas Alva Edison, Picasso, Einstein, etc. Beside that, maybe I'm going to do some exercise, such as running and playing badminton. I started to play badminton 2 weeks ago. Don't expect too much. I'm a noob player. I'm so grateful my friends are so kind and patient to teach me how to play badminton properly. I don't even know the rules😄. I've realized that it makes my skin get much smoother and my stretch marks are going to eventually disappear. That's cool. I thought I already lost some weight but sadly it's still the same😅. Nevertheless, my skin will glow and I will feel happier. To be honest, my psychologist diagnosed me with strong depression. She has recommended that I do some exercise. At first, I didn’t believe it would help but I've been doing what she said and I think it's working!
These sound like fun weekend plans. I hope the exercise helps with your depression and you feel better.
Feb 27, 2021 1:24 AM
I'm going to read the books which were on sale that I bought last year. The first book is It's Okay, You're Just Different by Kim Doo Eung. I've been reading this book since last month. Yeah, I'm a professional procrastinator🥲. Let's just finish the book this weekend. The book is about how certain mothers raised their children who later became fabulous people. You might know these people. They are Thomas Alva Edison, Picasso, Einstein, etc. Besides that, maybe I'm going to do some exercise, such as running and playing badminton. I've started playing badminton since 2 weeks. Don't expect too much. I'm a noob player. I'm so grateful my friends are so kind and patient to teach me how to play badminton properly. I don't even know the rules😄. I've realized that my skin gets much smoother and the stretch marks are going to disappear. That's cool. I thought I already lost some weight, but sadly it's still the same😅. Nevertheless, my skin will be glowing up and I feel happier. To be honest, my psychologist has diagnosed major depression to me (or "diagnosed me with major depression"). She has recommended that I do some exercise. At first, I didn't believe it, but I've been doing what she has said and I think it's working! ~~~~~~~~ Changing the order of the ideas in the first sentence will make it flow a little easier: ¨I'm going to read the books that I bought last year when they were on sale.¨ ¨I've started playing badminton.¨ is grammatically correct on its own. But because you added a specific time in the past that this happened, it needs to change to ¨I started playing badminton two weeks ago.¨ You've done a nice job with your writing. You seem to know a lot of colloquial phrases and you use them correctly -- noob, glowing up and (my favorite) professional procrastinator. The book you are reading sounds interesting. Biographies in general are great -- and the focus on the mother who raised these exceptional people is an interesting angle..
That's great that you're enjoying exercising and that it is making you feel good! If you don't mind my making a suggestion....it's really helpful to also discover some exercises that you can enjoy doing at home for those days when you can't go out to do a special activity that gives you exercise. I started doing Pilates exercises and I love the way they make me feel both relaxed and strong :-)
Feb 27, 2021 1:32 AM
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