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Hi there Are these all correct and do they make sense? When i was on my way home, i saw flowers lying scattered on the sidewalk, and i figured a young, probably a 5 or 6 -year old girl must have done it, because i had seen her picking flowers earlier. My second sentence is this:: dont park at the edge of the road, you see the sign? It says, no parking . My third sentence is:: Mother says, the one who just finished cleaning everywhere:: Son, dont walk barefoot, you feet will get filthy , and you will go into the rooms and walk on the new carpet , making it dirty again. The fourth one is :: this is it , guys, we are done with cleaning , you guys collect the leaves and take it to the trash Please, your answers are important. A huge thank you to you guys. Dont pay attention to Capitalization and punctuation, please. I want to know how they sound.
Dec 18, 2021 10:24 AM
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Hi there Are these all correct and do they make sense? When I was on my way home, I saw some flowers lying scattered on the sidewalk, and I figured a young girl, probably 5 or 6 -years old, must have done it because I had seen her picking flowers earlier. My second sentence is this:: Don't park at the edge of the road. Don't you see the sign? It says, no parking. My third sentence is:: Mother, who just finished cleaning everywhere says, "Son, don't go outside with bare feet. You feet will get filthy, and you will track dirt into the rooms and on the new carpet, and then I'll have to clean them all over again. The fourth one is :: This is it, guys, we are done with cleaning; you guys collect the leaves and take them to the trash. Please, your answers are important. A huge thank you to you guys. Dont pay attention to Capitalization and punctuation, please. I want to know how they sound.
So they were all very good, except the third one didn't sound natural. If the mother is inside the house telling her son to put on shoes before going out, she wouldn't say, "Don't walk barefoot." She might say what I wrote above, or, "Don't walk around barefoot outside." "Walk around with bare feet" comes more naturally to me than "walk around barefoot." But that might be a regional thing. I think both are fine.
December 18, 2021
Hi there Are these all correct and do they make sense? When i was on my way home, i saw flowers lying scattered on the sidewalk, and i figured a young, probably a 5 or 6 -year old girl must have done it, because i had seen her picking flowers earlier. My second sentence is this:: dont park on the edge of the road, you see the sign? It says, no parking . My third sentence is:: Mother says, the one who just finished cleaning everywhere:: Son, dont walk barefoot, you feet will get dirty and then you will leave footprints on the carpet when you walk all over it. The fourth one is :: this is it , guys, we are done with cleaning , you guys collect the leaves and take it to the trash Please, your answers are important. A huge thank you to you guys. Dont pay attention to Capitalization and punctuation, please. I want to know how they sound.
December 18, 2021
Hi there Are these all correct and do they make sense? When i was on my way home, I saw some flowers scattered on the sidewalk, and I figured out a young girl, probably 5-6 years old, must have done it, because I had seen her picking flowers earlier. My second sentence is this: dont park at the edge of the road. Do you see the sign? It says "no parking". My third sentence is: Mother says, after she finished cleaning everything: "Son, don't walk barefoot, your feet will get filthy, and you will enter the rooms and walk on the new carpet, making it dirty again." The fourth one is: This is it, guys, we are done with cleaning, so you guys collect the leaves and put them in the trash. Please, your answers are important. A huge thank you to you guys. Dont pay attention to Capitalization and punctuation, please. I want to know how they sound.
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December 18, 2021
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