USING CONNECTORS II ♡But on the other hand, I could meeting you next Monday. ♡By the way, Can you bring me my sweater tomorrow? I forgot it in your aparment. ♡How can I put it with delicadete? ♡I am

Cinthya Karina

USING CONNECTORS II ♡But on the other hand, I could meeting you next Monday. ♡By the way, Can you bring me my sweater tomorrow? I forgot it in your aparment. ♡How can I put it with delicadete? ♡I am afraid that she dies in the accident. ♡I can't help thinking that I have to work till late tomorrow. ♡I found out that he is not my biologic father. ♡I have a hunch that something is going bad. ♡I know for a fact that there sell drugs. ♡I rather think that I will walk again. ♡I would like to add I am glad to met you, you are very nice. ♡If I am not mistaken, they won the game. ♡It is no a secret that she's falling in love whit you. ♡It might be worth mentioning you have to wear formal outfit for the predentation. ♡It struck me that you was lying me all this time.

Feb 17, 2021 3:18 AM

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USING CONNECTORS II ♡On the other hand, I could meet you next Monday. ♡By the way, can you bring me my sweater tomorrow? I forgot it in your aparment. ♡How can I put it delicately? ♡I am afraid that she died in the accident. ♡I can't help thinking that I have to work until late tomorrow. ♡I found out that he is not my biological father. ♡I have a hunch that something is going badly. ♡I know for a fact that they are selling drugs. ♡I think that I will walk again. ♡I would like to add that I am glad to have met you, you are very nice. ♡If I am not mistaken, they won the game. ♡It is not a secret that she's falling in love with you. ♡It might be worth mentioning that you have to wear formal outfit for the presentation. ♡It struck me that you were lying to me all this time.

Keep up the good work Cinthya. It’s better not to start a phrase or sentence with “But”...... also true for “And”

February 18, 2021

But on the other hand, I could meet you next Monday. ♡By the way, Can you bring me my sweater tomorrow? I forgot it in your apartment. ♡How can I put it delicately? ♡I am afraid that she will die in the accident. ♡I can't help thinking that I have to work till late tomorrow. ♡I found out that he is not my biological father. ♡I have a hunch that something is going bad. ♡I know for a fact that they sell drugs. ♡I rather think that I will walk again. ♡I would like to add I am glad to meet you, you are very nice. ♡If I am not mistaken, they won the game. ♡It is no secret that she's falling in love with you. ♡It might be worth mentioning you have to wear a formal outfit for the presentation. ♡It struck me that you were lying to me all this time.

February 17, 2021

USING CONNECTORS II ♡But on the other hand, I could MEET(not meeting) you next Monday. ♡By the way, Can you bring me my sweater tomorrow? I forgot it in your aparment. ♡How can I put it DELICATELY? ♡I am afraid that she DIED in the accident. ♡I can't help thinking that I have to work till late tomorrow. ♡I found out that he is not my BIOLOGICAL father. ♡I have a hunch that something is going bad. ♡I know for a fact that THEY sell drugs. ♡I THINK I WOULD rather walk again. ♡I would like to add I am glad to MEET you, you are very nice. ♡If I am not mistaken, they won the game. ♡It is NOT a secret that she's falling in love WITH you. ♡It might be worth mentioning you have to wear formal outfit for the PRESENTATION. ♡It struck me that you WERE lying TO me all this time.

February 17, 2021

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