Kanae
Please correct my English and tell me a more natural way to write the following sentences.🥺🙏 I just watched a movie called Mamma Mia Here Go Again. It was sooo great! マンマミーアHere Go Againという映画を見終えました!すっっごく良かった! The songs and dances are awesome and the plot is also good. It's a touching and fascinating movie. 歌とダンスは素晴らしく、話の内容も最高だった。感動的で魅力的な映画です。 Especially, I couldn't stop crying at the last scene of Donna and Sophie. I thought that maternal love is really great. 特に、ドナとソフィの最後のシーンは涙が止まらなかった。母の愛は本当に偉大だと思う。 I really want to watch season 1 of this movie but why Netflix doesn't have it. Ahh, It's too sad.😭 この映画のシーズン1がめちゃくちゃ見たい!けど、なんでネットフリックスにシーズン1がないの?はぁ〜悲しすぎる。 Anyway, I think I'll watch season 2 again on the next my day off. とりあえず、また次の休みはシーズン2をもう一回見ようかな!
Oct 22, 2020 5:22 AM
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Please correct my English and tell me a more natural way to write the following sentences.🥺🙏 I just watched a movie called Mamma Mia Here Go Again. It was sooo great! マンマミーアHere Go Againという映画を見終えました!すっっごく良かった! The songs and dances were awesome and the plot was also great. It was a touching and fascinating movie. 歌とダンスは素晴らしく、話の内容も最高だった。感動的で魅力的な映画です。 I couldn't stop crying at the last scene of Donna and Sophie. It made me think that maternal love is really something special. 特に、ドナとソフィの最後のシーンは涙が止まらなかった。母の愛は本当に偉大だと思う。 I really want to watch season 1 of this movie but for some reason Netflix doesn't have it. Ahh, It's too sad.😭 この映画のシーズン1がめちゃくちゃ見たい!けど、なんでネットフリックスにシーズン1がないの?はぁ〜悲しすぎる。 Anyway, I think I'll watch season 2 again on my next day off. とりあえず、また次の休みはシーズン2をもう一回見ようかな!
I changed ‘good’ to ‘great’ because you used ‘awesome’ followed by ‘also’, so it felt more natural to have a word closer to ‘awesome’. Some alternatives; ‘The last scene with Donna and Sophia really got me’ ‘The last scene with Donna and Sophia was especially moving’
October 22, 2020
Please correct my English and tell me a more natural way to write the following sentences.🥺🙏 I just watched a movie called Mamma Mia Here Go Again. It was sooo great! マンマミーアHere Go Againという映画を見終えました!すっっごく良かった! The songs and dances were awesome and the plot was good too. It's a touching and fascinating movie. 歌とダンスは素晴らしく、話の内容も最高だった。感動的で魅力的な映画です。I couldn't stop crying at the last scene of Donna and Sophie. I thought that maternal love was beautiful. 特に、ドナとソフィの最後のシーンは涙が止まらなかった。母の愛は本当に偉大だと思う。 I really want to watch the first movie in this franchise but Netflix doesn't have it. Ahh, It's too sad.😭 この映画のシーズン1がめちゃくちゃ見たい!けど、なんでネットフリックスにシーズン1がないの?はぁ〜悲しすぎる。 Anyway, I think I'll watch the second movie again on my next day off. とりあえず、また次の休みはシーズン2をもう一回見ようかな!
You did well but you just needed some corrections :) I hope this helps a bit! Any questions please feel free to ask :)
October 22, 2020
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Kanae
Language Skills
English, Japanese
Learning Language
English