Yu Naing
I love to eat Cheese burger and sometimes I make it for my husband.Today, I made Cheese Tuna sandwiches.Firstly,I split the bread.Secondly, mixed the Tuna and Mayonnaise and then I sliced some Tomatoes,Lettuce.I put the those salad in bread.I added cheese and Nando’s sauce.Finally,I serveed the Tuna cheese sandwich.It’s very easy to me.
Oct 24, 2020 4:00 PM
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I love to eat Cheese burger and sometimes I make it for my husband.Today, I made Cheese Tuna sandwiches.Firstly,I split the bread.Secondly, mixed the Tuna and Mayonnaise and then I sliced some Tomatoes,Lettuce.I put the those salad in bread.I added cheese and Nando’s sauce.Finally,I serveed the Tuna cheese sandwich.It’s very easy to me.
— may be it would be better to say “I love eating cheese burgers and sometimes I make them for my husband”. — there is no need in comma after “today” — use “some bread” instead of “the bread” — “I mix” , “I slice” — “I put some salad in bread” — “I add some cheese” — “serve”
October 24, 2020
I love eating Cheese burgers and sometimes I make them for my husband.I make Cheese Tuna sandwiches.Firstly,I split some bread.Secondly, mix the Tuna and Mayonnaise and then I slice some Tomatoes,Lettuce.I put some salad in bread.I add cheese and Nando’s sauce.Finally,I serve the Tuna cheese sandwich.It’s very easy to me.
October 24, 2020
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Yu Naing
Language Skills
English, American Sign Language (ASL)
Learning Language
English